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A treacherous situation and at the mercy of a sadistic bounty hunter from Andi's pastMeanwhile across the galaxy a ruthless ruler waits in the shadows of the planet Xen Ptera biding her time to exact revenge for the destruction of her people The pieces of her deadly plan are about to fall into place unleashing a plot that will te. FULL REVIEW WITH RECEIPTS NOW POSTED god this is a mess I don t even know where to start With the honestly awful writing The boring and poorly written characters the predictable plot I just don t know it s all a mess the concept is fine the execution is terrible Thus this review may be rambly I m so sorrystandard disclaimer I didn t reuest an arc of this book so I could trash it I didn t even go into this with bad expectations I ve genuinely enjoyed Sasha s youtube in the past and I genuinely enjoy sci fi and I wanted to genuinely read this to give it an honest opinion like I would any other book that being said I honestly just think this book is kinda terrible and I actually feel a little sorry for people who spent money on it The main problem with this book is it s so badly written full of cliche lines and awkward sentences it s impossible to read it and take it seriously I don t know what happened here did this book not even get edited Some examples First we have stuff that s just awkward andor doesn t make sense Everyone became a number in the end Valen was 306 Deep in the belly of hell incarnatedeep in the belly of hell incarnate it just do you see it s just AWKWARD That line could have been made so much less awkward It doesn t even make sensewhy do you insist on ruining my beauty sleep she said in her fluid little voice HER FLUID LITTLE VOICE death filled the void left behind THIS DOES NOT MAKE SENSEThere s a lot of references to demonshell and stuff like that which feels really forced and fake deep like a demon emerging from hell she was an angel of darkness come to him in the pits of hell Androma Racella wasn t an angel she was death incarnate another awkward use of incarnate There is also lots of cat references she was angry as a wet feline hissing and spitting like cats thrown into watera gruesome creature Darai was ALSO what I m talking about this so clearly is poor grammar why is this not edited it felt as if the weight of a thousand boulders were all forced into it seeking to torment her endlessly what lol So there s one bit where a character says you dare to approach me in my private uarters What is the meaning of this AND THEN NOT EVEN HALF A PAGE LATER What is the meaning of this you dare to speak to me Like this is what I m talking about HOW does no editor pick this up and go hmm maybe we should use a different line here then we have cliche lines or things that are out of placeFirst of all we re introduced to a character who s tagline is vengeance will be mine It s such a cliche line and it s said NO LESS THEN FOUR TIMES in the first 3 page chapter THATS TOO MUCH And worse every time he appears I need to hear him say this line and urgh Dex sighed Use your words Use your words just feels so weird for aliens to be using but maybe thats me being nitpickywe can do this the easy way or the hard way UM is there any greater clichePERHAPS MY FAVOURITE HOPE IS A RAGING ASSHOLE WHAT DOES THAT EVEN MEAN WHAT JGKFJGKgross romance linesfirst of all this book is so painfully straight it hurts like even the fucking AI end up in a mf relationship In her place stood the warrior he d trained and hardened into something devilishly delicious DEVILISHLY DELICIOUS DJFHDSJFHSKJDYou were always one for theatrics Androma My bitter little ballerina I am not and never will be yours We ll see about that Hmm yes romanticthen he lurched forward and in one sweeping movement mashed his lips up against hers ah gross sounds gross was gross because it was OBVIOUSLY NOT CONSENSUAL Non Con kiss was never discussed againhis lithe muscles on display explain to me how muscles are litheSO CAN YOU SEE I AM NOT JOKING ABOUT THE WRITING and truly I have just chosen out the smallest sample There are so many awkward cliche badly worded and non sensical lines The overuse of similes all of which are inelegant and awkward comparisons just made me cringe AND I DONT KNOW WHO S FAULT THIS IS Because maybe it s the authors but maybe it s the editors Writing aside there s nothing compelling about the characters or plot either Androma is introduced as The Bloody Baroness she s supposedly ruthless and deadly and a notorious space criminal Androma spends half her time killing people and the other half reflecting on how she s such a monster and so awful and regrets everything It feels like she s supposed to be Kaz Brekker and Caelana Sardothien in one but it DOESN T WORK Her character arc needed to be so much tight to actually make me understand the development because as it stands I don t know if I m supposed to think of Androma as a sympathetic character fallen into bad circumstances or a ruthless trained killerThe love interest Dex is so flat and I literally could not name you one character trait he possesses he is literally given ZERO DEPTH The only bit ofhim I claim if when he allows the girls to paint his nails and he s pretty chill with it which was kinda coolThe crew also needed depth and work Breck Gilly and Lira have a fun dynamic together but no individual depth Gilly giggles and shoots people Breck is just there Lira is an alien and she loves her crew and there s some sort of backstory hinted at but we don t get much Breck is also drawn as a black woman in the character cards but there s literally nothing in the story that suggests she is black I DON T EVEN REMEMBER THEM DESCRIBING HER AS BLACK That representation amounts to a big fat nothingOther rep I direct you to Amber s review for the PTSD rep which she describes as laughable So character wise I was let down There s nothing really compelling about any of them even in the villains are poorly fleshed out and never feel like a threat In fact nothing feels like a thread because the characters are so perfectly able so incredibly capable and deadly that there s never a threat None of them have any traits and certainly no flawsTHE PLOT IS SO BORING Nothing really happens and the actual escape effort all goes over in one chapter The rest is jusr the characters doing random things Floating aroundThe whole concept had potential and I would have loved if the objective of the characters was clearly layed out Though to be honest the plot is the least of my complains this book is not worth your money It s not even worth reading for a laugh because it s not even that it s funny in it s plainness It s just boring It s just so intensely mediocre I don t know what else to say It s boring and plain and brings nothing new to the table It utilises every cliche without making them exciting or interesting and is trying so hard to be marketable but falls so short I had to SET THE TIMER TO FORCE MYSELF TO READ THIS ARC whcih is not greatJust don t Even if you love female space saga s I promise you this isn t worth it Find something elseneedless to say I will not be continuing the series PLEASE talk to me in the comments about the uotes and assure me I m not the only one who had to suffer reading themme this entire book Sienkiewicz. 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emerging from hell she was an angel of darkness come to him in the pits of hell Androma Racella wasn t an angel she was death incarnate another awkward use of incarnate There is also lots of cat references she was angry as a wet feline hissing and spitting like cats thrown into watera gruesome creature Darai was ALSO what I m talking about this so clearly is poor grammar why is this not Craft edited it felt as if the weight of a thousand boulders were all forced into it seeking to torment her Król życia endlessly what lol So there s one bit where a character says you dare to approach me in my private uarters What is the meaning of this AND THEN NOT EVEN HALF A PAGE LATER What is the meaning of this you dare to speak to me Like this is what I m talking about HOW does no Dangerous Promise (Promises editor pick this up and go hmm maybe we should use a different line here then we have cliche lines or things that are out of placeFirst of all we re introduced to a character who s tagline is vengeance will be mine It s such a cliche line and it s said NO LESS THEN FOUR TIMES in the first 3 page chapter THATS TOO MUCH And worse Red Skies Falling (Skybound, every time he appears I need to hear him say this line and urgh Dex sighed Use your words Use your words just feels so weird for aliens to be using but maybe thats me being nitpickywe can do this the William (Enemies to Lovers, easy way or the hard way UM is there any greater clichePERHAPS MY FAVOURITE HOPE IS A RAGING ASSHOLE WHAT DOES THAT EVEN MEAN WHAT JGKFJGKgross romance linesfirst of all this book is so painfully straight it hurts like From Irenaeus to Grotius even the fucking AI A May to December Romance end up in a mf relationship In her place stood the warrior he d trained and hardened into something devilishly delicious DEVILISHLY DELICIOUS DJFHDSJFHSKJDYou were always one for theatrics Androma My bitter little ballerina I am not and never will be yours We ll see about that Hmm yes romanticthen he lurched forward and in one sweeping movement mashed his lips up against hers ah gross sounds gross was gross because it was OBVIOUSLY NOT CONSENSUAL Non Con kiss was never discussed againhis lithe muscles on display Herman Hertzberger editors Writing aside there s nothing compelling about the characters or plot Family Secrets either Androma is introduced as The Bloody Baroness she s supposedly ruthless and deadly and a notorious space criminal Androma spends half her time killing people and the other half reflecting on how she s such a monster and so awful and regrets Wolves Among Sheep everything It feels like she s supposed to be Kaz Brekker and Caelana Sardothien in one but it DOESN T WORK Her character arc needed to be so much tight to actually make me understand the development because as it stands I don t know if I m supposed to think of Androma as a sympathetic character fallen into bad circumstances or a ruthless trained killerThe love interest Dex is so flat and I literally could not name you one character trait he possesses he is literally given ZERO DEPTH The only bit ofhim I claim if when he allows the girls to paint his nails and he s pretty chill with it which was kinda coolThe crew also needed depth and work Breck Gilly and Lira have a fun dynamic together but no individual depth Gilly giggles and shoots people Breck is just there Lira is an alien and she loves her crew and there s some sort of backstory hinted at but we don t get much Breck is also drawn as a black woman in the character cards but there s literally nothing in the story that suggests she is black I DON T EVEN REMEMBER THEM DESCRIBING HER AS BLACK That representation amounts to a big fat nothingOther rep I direct you to Amber s review for the PTSD rep which she describes as laughable So character wise I was let down There s nothing really compelling about any of them Writing Fight Scenes even in the villains are poorly fleshed out and never feel like a threat In fact nothing feels like a thread because the characters are so perfectly able so incredibly capable and deadly that there s never a threat None of them have any traits and certainly no flawsTHE PLOT IS SO BORING Nothing really happens and the actual Włosy Mamy even worth reading for a laugh because it s not Caring for Victor even that it s funny in it s plainness It s just boring It s just so intensely mediocre I don t know what Un matrimonio americano (AdN) (Adn Alianza De Novelas) else to say It s boring and plain and brings nothing new to the table It utilises Omkara every cliche without making them AMSG exciting or interesting and is trying so hard to be marketable but falls so short I had to SET THE TIMER TO FORCE MYSELF TO READ THIS ARC whcih is not greatJust don t Even if you love female space saga s I promise you this isn t worth it Find something Who Killed Hazel Drew? 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Zenith by Sasha Alsberg

Most know Androma Racella as the Bloody Baroness a powerful mercenary whose reign of terror stretches across the Mirabel Galaxy To those aboard her glass starship Marauder however she's just Andi their friend and fearless leaderBut when a routine mission goes awry the Marauder's all girl crew is tested as they find themselves in. 25 possibly An author is not their book I am going to be honest whether I know the author or not Me critiuing a book is not a personal attack on the author no matter who they may be I am super proud of these ladies for getting BookTubers names on a published book whether I liked the book or not does not change that fact The audiobook was definitely the route to go with this one for me The story overall was entertaining and pretty enjoyable though a bit corny I had a few issues with the writing repetition conciseness and word choice being chief among them The story didn t need to be as long as it was nor did it need to have as many characters as it did but they were a fun group of girls who exhibited a great example of the strength of female friendship If you re apprehensive about trying this out maybe give the audiobook a go It was a great full cast audio and really helped to bring the story to life

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Ar Mirabel in twoAndi and her crew embark on a dangerous soul testing journey that could restore order to their ship or just as easily start a war that will devour worlds As the Marauder hurtles toward the unknown and Mirabel hangs in the balance the only certainty is that in a galaxy run on lies and illusion no one can be truste. Watch my full video review here Geschichten aus Latexia embark on a dangerous soul testing journey that could restore order to their ship or just as Mating Flight easily start a war that will devour worlds As the Marauder hurtles toward the unknown and Mirabel hangs in the balance the only certainty is that in a galaxy run on lies and illusion no one can be truste. Watch my full video review here


10 thoughts on “Zenith by Sasha Alsberg

  1. says:

    So I received an arc of this and I just I just can'tIt's so stupid It's so badI was either cringing or laughing whilst reading this and only managed to get through 100 pages before I started skimmingThis is the flimsiest sci fi I've encountered It's laughableSpoilers ahoyThe world building is SO LAME People are constantly described with kooky features; red and white striped eyes webbed feeton someone who's evidently bare

  2. says:

    25 possibly? An author is not their book I am going to be honest whether I know the author or not Me critiuing a book is not a personal attack on the author no matter who they may be I am super proud of these ladies for get

  3. says:

    Edit 47 After further reflection I've decided to drop my rating to 3 stars All of my previous likesdislikes of Zenith still

  4. says:

    Thanks NetGalley for the eARC All opinions are my ownTrigger Warnings murder PTSD bad rep griefEDIT 200118 I’m not sure if I missed it but a r

  5. says:

    FULL REVIEW WITH RECEIPTS NOW POSTED god this is a mess I don't even know where to start With the honestly awful writing? The boring and poorly written characters? the predictable plot? I just don't know it's all a mess the concept i

  6. says:

    I am much elouent on camera than in writing so please click here for my full video review15 stars Random pointless italicized words Repeating sentence structure for EMPHASIS but ultimately failed Hope is a raging asshole wet feline

  7. says:

    FIRST like mentioned before thatYes I am friends with SashaNO I am not being paid to review thisand ALL THOUGHTS ARE MY OWN I am 23 years old and just because I am friends with the other means I will review it positively I have even spoken to Sasha before I started and told her I would be honest and OF COURSE

  8. says:

    I'm so over books being published because of fame I get it that there's some work involved but it's so Ivanka Trump when people who are famous tell me in their high pitched fluttery voices I worked so hard just like everybody else to be successful and I'm like no You're successful because you worked hard at being famous Big Difference Not the other way around God I miss that time in our society when hard work

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    Watch my full video review here

  10. says:

    “We’ll have to move uickly once we get inside No than forty minutes”“Plenty of time to raise hell” Gilly said We are raised with the common precept of Don't judge a book by it's cover However in the very special case of Zenith I foun

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